Monday, March 7, 2016

Steven and Ellen and the princess jack

Once upon a time no that's to lame. Steve was eating the levels and the Ellen said my name is Ellen (very slowly because she is a sloth) any way this is Steve talking he's the coolest he's awesome heeesss Steve what awesome and I'm princes jack and I hate the name ellen gave me i hate the babbon and sloth. In the jungle. The end 

3 comments:

  1. I like the way you have used punctuation. I would like to hear more about your story.

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  2. I like how you used lots of adjectives.I would like to see more of the story

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  3. I liked how you used adjectives

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