Once upon a time no that's to lame. Steve was eating the levels and the Ellen said my name is Ellen (very slowly because she is a sloth) any way this is Steve talking he's the coolest he's awesome heeesss Steve what awesome and I'm princes jack and I hate the name ellen gave me i hate the babbon and sloth. In the jungle. The end
I like the way you have used punctuation. I would like to hear more about your story.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used lots of adjectives.I would like to see more of the story
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used adjectives
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