Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Spirit

Once upon a time there was a story, a story lost in time but luckily for us some people can remember and soon you will too.

It all started sixty eight billion years ago when the world was still new the world decided the land needed guidance to help people to put the right foot down when they needed help, A spirit animal, a animal that will grow into your closes friend and will never leave, and will always understand when you need help

5 comments:

  1. Wow cool story!!!!!!!!!
    I like your spelling
    I like your introduition
    I think you need to work on your puntion.
    well done

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  2. i would love to hear the ending
    put a full stop at the end of the seantease

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  3. nice story,I love your story

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