Once upon a time a long time ago there was a land, this land was called Aspella, Aspella had both beauty and darkness...
It was a dark and quite night intel one single strike of lightning and everything had changed, there was screaming there was shouting and there was riding, on that very night the queen of the kingdom had grabbed her only daughter and had rode away on a horse uintel there was no where to go and she did her only choice she made a portal into the other land, the land of Esmella where her child was to grow in a life that would keep the danger out of her life for as long as 15 years
14 years later
Oh come on Lily just a ride little ride into the forest won't do any harm, it's not like I'm 15 yet. Well is there any difference between 15 in a day or 14? You need to train. No I am going out riding. Alice!!!
Why Alice I have been expecting you, then suddenly Alice was lifted of her horse and put in mid air in front of a tree then a huge branch went across her neck slowly strangling her. Goodbye Alex, I hope we don't meet again. After 2 hours
Oh my gosh I have to alert lily and then the last thing she remembered was blacking out.
Doctor, Doctor!! Will she survive? It looks like it's unlikely she will survive unless she uses her powers. What powers? Ask her when she's awake. Day and night she waited for her to wake sneaking out of bed to check on her uintel one day she saw a slight movement in the bed, Alice was waking up... Carol where am I? I had this dream that I went out riding but I ran into the lighting bolts and then you found me but then I blacked out. That was no dream, they're back. But before I explain you need to tell me about those powers. Fine my birthday is on the 30th of July and... and my father and mother are called Chancellor & Alexia Press, and my real name is Alicante Press. Show me the amulet.
Here... Oh, I just can't believe it, my best friend is actually the most powerful person in earth. Shhhhhhhhhhh. Sorry. Now tell me more about the Lightning bolts well they made a portal into here, Esmella and unlucky for you on that very same day you where going out riding and walked straight into them but they had been expecting you and tried to strangle you. You where there for nearly 2 hours but then Lily had sent me out to find you and I nearly walked into you. So I called Lily and told her that I had found you and I used a tiny bit of power to untangle you but the second I touched you, you lighted up and released yourself and that was when Lily arrived holding a horse so she did on a horse back with you on the back of the horse into the hos... Quickly the night gaurds are soon going to check your room you need to get into bed. Night, night now go shoo
I like how you used punctuation and capital letters and full sops
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I like how you used punctuation and capital letters and full sops
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There was soooo much writing I'd like a little more detail good job.
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ReplyDeletelove the story,I like how you used punctuation .
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It is really!! long
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