Dave is a normal caveman he lives in the jungle in his little treehouse.
He has no friends one day he decided to go for a walk.
He found a cave so then he peeked in....
He could heard something funny it was an ape.
It was a girl and he named it Paige.Dave took her home.
Then he showed her around he went to get a drink
When he came back she was gone
So he went out of his treehouse and
Looked and looked and looked
But dave couden't find her
He looked were he found her in the first place
And she was there with her family
And she lived happily ever after
And Dave found some other friends.
I like the full stops and capital letters I also like the end
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on maybe adding a bit more information
I like how you have put full stops and capital letters
ReplyDeleteMaybe add a problem and more information